Saturday, March 25, 2006

From My Bed. Comments

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Here she comes. the big fat lump,
Her clothes come off and then she'll thump,
Her backside on my protesting frame,
I'm straining now. It's such a shame.
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Lizzy Tomlinson
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Preeti - is here! 11 July 2006

gosh..u did fool me. and made me say LoL too! Preets

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Sonny Rainshine 26 March 2006

Thanks for your comment about my poem. I read yours (From My Bed) and enjoyed it. That's the cool thing about poetry: any subject can be approached from an infinite number of viewpoints. I'm especially fond of rhyming poetry and you have some very well-crafted rhymes in there. Good work. Usually my poems are metered and rhymed, but that form just didn't seem right for my Beds poem. Keep those poems coming. Poemhunter is a nice site-not as competitive as a lot of similiar poem posting sites I've seen out there.

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Sydney Daniels 25 March 2006

You made me smile! Great write from a unique perspective!

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Jerzegirl *~~ 25 March 2006

What a fun read :) from a great viewpoint

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Lizzy Tomlinson

Lizzy Tomlinson

Dundee, Scotland.
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