Thursday, August 20, 2020

From Loneliness To Aloneness Comments

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She was a little girl at heart
Always chasing after butterflies
But everything seemed to melt away
Nothing she touched felt real
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Deluke Muwanigwa 20 August 2020

Beautiful poem. It has the hallmarks of a contry song if the strongest lines which rhyme could be gathered into grounds of 4,6 or 8 lines then a chorus. Chorus She's the girl from Mochudi She completely misunderstood She finds peace in her loneliness Happy in her aloneness Girl from Mochudi, there misunderstood Loneliness, aloneness, girl from Mochudi Lol....i chose Mochudi because it rhymes with misunderstood. Great poem.

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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