Saturday, August 4, 2012

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Another day comes and leaves this dim place
Everywhere is full of soldier's speeches, I hate their double face
People around me think that they are the best
But these guys will fail in the life's test
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Ellias Anderson Jr.
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Hamid Negah 06 August 2012

Very beautiful, poem with good rhyme is enjoyable poem, i love it more.

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Unwritten Soul 04 August 2012

The last line is great but i love this I'm tired of the inner pain I will fly with all the color, I will go up, higher and higher, so high in spirit so cool in enthusiastic _Soul

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Nurain Ali-balogun 04 August 2012

Whao! this is terrific and deep.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

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