Thursday, February 26, 2009

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as the cool morning breeze rolled off the ocean
the sailors slowly rise from thier slumber
they gazed at the skies above
their expressions were mournful
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David Scott 06 October 2009

Wow, captivating. Please post some more!

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~ Jon London ~ 26 February 2009

Nice visual piece written with a fine pen Good job Keeping expressing your poetic voice Jon

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