From Goethe On Boldness (For Poets And Others Comments

Still very unsure. Plus, I like Goethe's ideas on colour, but your poem doesn't talk about his ideas on colour... It'd be a LOT cooler without the letters of the alphabet making up that supposedly perfect syntax, which is, in my eyes: Boring.

Michael this is superb - your sonnet form is perfect, your content edifying and filled with truth. It's always so satisfying to read your work. Satisfying and humbling too. love Allie xxxx

Great poem there my friend.