~ From Fathomless Skyline ~ Comments

Great I feel- but at this age I am not able to fathom the real meaning and import!

Great I feel- but at this age I am not able to fathom the real meaning and import!

The voice can die out if unheard. Hope the You of this poem heard. Hope for the best, always. Be happy :)

Wisdom manifesting itself through you, my friend, deep and excellent write!

Amazing use of words they just floated on air as I read it.Nice use of metaphors. Thank you for sharing.I am jealous I can't write half as well as you lol.

I enjoyed reading this poem immensely. It is a love poem with a difference, it has a little bit of erotica and a little bit of humor which contributes to it's appeal.......10

Why these indolent Illusionary indulgences Creeps in me for more? .... ya it is quite imagery in question but real one..makes me to ponder over.. nice enticing too....10

a very enticing poem for one with great imagination i give a 10

I'm so old I need a new dictionary.

abstract lines that invite the reader to deep thought..very well conceived poem....

Classy Poem…adieu made very touchy and appealing… ‘O’ my chummy pal Listen me ~ Better Own my aching finery In your deep recess trove As lofty leisure luxury.’…here the poem has reached to the acme of emotion unlimited…in a melancholy easel…to me this melancholy has become magnanimous… unstinted… munificent… bounteous-vibe… 10++ Dr. V.

Mellifluent fountain ... in rilling splendor…readers ‘tour de force’… ‘From fathomless skyline’ we’re hearing not adieu …but lambent Venus Singing temptingness melody…finest emotion in luxury of lachrymation…very well done Ma’am 10++

Very soft and lithe poetry…crossed the world of virtuality to reality …the words are live and alive with all brilliance and brightness …canvas and emotion are very befitting and very much heart touching… ‘A moment more O’ lambent Venus Sing temptingness Affable agleam adieu…’ this reminds me the play Othello where Othello before assassinating Desdemona…asked for one more kiss… 10+

beautiful! i hope i can be like you but of course it's a dream: D thanks for sharing

This poem drew my attention because of my poem - 'Visions of the Deep Blue Emphyrean'! Your poem is well written from a new angle! Notes are always helpful due to the cross section of our readers! -Raj

Within the frame of virtuals, very nice depiction of emotions and sensuality executed. Submission of glossary is very useful.Your poems and comments entail an excellent use of vocabulary without being flowery.Final words as per my perception are putting an end to these imaginations--am I right? For voting I always use secret ballot, but these days secret submission is eluding me, so franchising open vote by giving much more than ten.

your diction is unbeatable, i enjoyed flying across while reading and i must confess that your glossary is really helpful. b'ful imagination, i have finally stopped thinking in its summit. it's lovely 10++

Brilliant work the sky is blue and wide enjoy the pleasure of flying, can treased a lot... and listen the powerful integreated voice AUM...thanks 10+

Bondage never breaks if it lies in the soul. An intense flame of love and departing embracing together with an electrified shocking sensation to the reader. Let the fathomless skyline hang on hollowness, here on earth we are. A gravitational force is also there. So life is so cracked and marvellous at the same phase of time. Be stout and take challenges of time. Well-written another experience of poem. Run long.....long.....to blend the earth with your creative fragrance. Regards, 10++++ pranab

Wow.......i think this poem is so beautifully written, even the classics would be delighted reading it......it is like a enigma.......10+