Monday, March 21, 2016

From Dust We Came Comments

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This thing called Death is but a return
To the soil from whence we came,
The soft clay of this Earth, our components,
Formed into shapes, then given a name
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Lora Colon
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Jak Black 29 March 2016

A great piece, Lora. We shall all return from whence we came, the elements. Our value diminishes to naught............... Death is the ultimate leveller. a speck of dust in eternity....................As individuals we are so insignificant in the great scheme of time and distance. Very well written, Lora. A lesson in humility.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 March 2016

I was looking for some comfort through poetry this morning. Luckily, I came across this beautiful poem of yours in which you have seen death so at ease! It cheered me up. 'From dust we came, to dust we shall return' - exactly this line is there in our Holy Book, The Quran. Excellent poem,10/10.

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Lora Colon

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