From Dust To Dust Comments
From dust to dust our lives are thrust,
while flames the candle's brief combust.
We leave the shelter of the bay,
unmindful night will follow day,
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Wonderful work...specially the last stanza...much inspiring
A brilliant poem with great inbuilt message! Admired the lyrical touch into the undertaken concept!
The message and rhyme scheme work hand in hand and there are no dust-ups (except man and womankind) in this splendid write. To paraphrase your rhymes; 'let us trust in more than dust after we turn to rust.' Your poet notes are informative and wonderfully detailed!
A brilliant poem you have crafted dear poet. Thanks for sharing such beautiful poem. Great write
Thank you for reading it and for your words of approval about the poem. I appreciate it!
All nature seems a sage august. In paths of promises we trust, not weighing dreams along the way from dust to dust.......nice poetic expression. Beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm pleased that you liked the poem...
it's a great - All nature seems a sage august. In paths of promises we trust, ...///
I’m pleased that you noticed my care in constructing the lines. Thank you.
Phenomenal imagery, you've captured some beautiful words every line is captivating exploration into the life of stars. I love the celestial nature of this poem, its not often writers truly explore the cosmic canvass of the brilliance of stellar matter. I love the recurring theme in the lines of dust to dust, even stars for all their brilliance are like all life finite creations. We are all star dust. Magnificent poem well chosen for POTD!
Such superlative remarks lift my spirits to the stars and encourage me on creatively. Thank you so much!
A super impressive poem both in subject matter and style. Seems to flow so naturally. Congratulations for this beautiful poem.
Very good poem. It is quite different, yet fulfilling all the while. Glad you shared it.
A powerful and insightful poem. Each stanza stands out. Beautifully crafted.
I greatly appreciate your marvelous and thoughtful comment. Thank you.
Nice recreation on the old adage From Dust We Come and To Dust We Shall return.
Well now, just look at you, I marveled at this poem when I first read it..I am thrilled that it was fittingly chosen as poem of the day, your poetry is extremely unique and so very refreshing...congrats...be proud my friend! By the way...good call on the change in the last stanza
Thank you so much for your constant warm support of my poetry! I am truly grateful to have you for such a special reader! And I’m pleased that you liked my change at the end, too…
Within the poem's form is set the day-to-day humanity together with the thoughts and dreams and finally the.wonderful image of stellar dust. The adherence to the form of the Rondeau adds power to this poem.
Ah, you have really expressed what I was hoping to capture in the poem. I appreciate the encouragement.
All you see is actually a celestial dust and end up in the dust of the earth. Great.
Shelter of the bay of life! ! Day and night with nature; Born to live and, To die one day. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
You have caught the resonances in the poem. I appreciate your comment.
CONGRATULATIONS for being chosen as Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! Thank you for sharing this poem full of brilliance. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. Amen. The picture is marvelous.
Thank you for reading it. Yes, the picture is a special addition to me as well...
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7/19/2025 12:18:34 PM # 1.0.0
Well conceived and nicely brought forth in verse with rhythmic splendour. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction...