From Dusk To Dawn Comments
From dusk to dawn, i think of you,
your gleaming eyes and all you do,
the warmth of your skin, the touch of your lips,
you in my sight i cry, every time away
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i love your rhyming(: goshh you are such an amazinnn poet i love you =]
Very tender with just a touch of spice to lure the one you care about. A good write, some rhyming and structure was good. Very strong from someone so young, my friend. Lynn
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7/20/2025 6:49:28 AM # 1.0.0
Good imagery; I can see in my mind's eye a young man yearning for his love through a sleepless night. Very tender and sweet.