From Dependency To Independency Comments

Such a beautiful poem. Life comes full circle when children carried by mother carry her along. It is difficult to become dependent for the one who have been independent. Equally heartbreaking for children to watch it. Thanks for sharing Akhtarji. Memories of my mother came alive to me.

When it comes to mother, we all wax eloquent on our love and dependence on her as there is no body else on Earth to substitute her! Here you have painted a touching portrait! Beautiful!

Such a touching and poignant poem. I am what I am, at least in good part, because of my long dead mother.

What a wonderful poem! Very realistic. A vivid portrayal of the great bond between mother and child. I was teary eyed while reading this. I remembered my mother. This poem fuels me to love my mother more. Thank you, Akhtar for this brilliant write. 10++++ and onto my Poem List.

ek ansooon tera... motee kaee tarah jub tapka... ussey maine amrit ke tarah pee liya...eh maaa ammeee mere shukriya...I forgot to add It is a real treat to scan all your works repeatedly...Sir this is transformation...like my poem Mother's Day Today - - which translations also make you may.... Thanks it happens to us all equally...particularly to those... who are born before MIDNITE...Were you? ? ? ?

I forgot to add It is a real treat to scan all your works repeatedly...Sir this is transformation...like my poem Mother's Day Today - - which translations also make you may.... Thanks it happens to us all equally...particularly to those... who are born before MIDNITE...Were you? ? ? ?

Sir this is transformation...like my poem Mother's Day Today - - which translations also make you may.... Thanks it happens to us all equally...particularly to those... who are born before MIDNITE...Were you? ? ? ?

greatly crafted the poem is- My Lord! Bestow on them (on both my parents) your Mercy even as they cherished me in childhood. (The Noble Qur'an: Surah-17 ~ Ayah-24) great 10++

Time teaches me - I was nothing, I am nothing, I will be nothing although I am everything here 'I' denotes every human being greatly written - 10+++

Such a great write, Akhtar....10++++