From Deep Inside Comments

Good JaimieG13 hours ago great emotion Comment +1 Worth a read.

d. Jeannie Yates13 hours ago I enjoyed reading this and Im sure the author put a lot of personal feeling and emotion into it. Its worth the time to read it. Comment +1 Good

Garrett Chapman13 hours ago Good, but seems forced.

good Gajanan Mishra1 day ago nice Comment +1 Nice Sentiment needs some dynamics in structure

Thomas Franks24 hours ago I think this poem kind of says the same thing in a variety of ways. I think the sentiment. The structure lacks dynamics. I wish he'd broken it up, for example songs have a chorus, ramps and verses and they achieve some dynamics that way by having these different pattered patterns. The soul of it's good, it just needs some structure work. Comment 1 Comment+1 Nicely written

Sweet Talker1 day ago nice poem, beautiful rhyming structure. :)

Sophia Sundar its really good... ? it! about a minute ago • Like

Smile comes from deep inside If you have dream with full desire outside