Tuesday, August 5, 2008

From Castle Walls Comments

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ACT ONE-
Electricity fizzles through her eyes,
And there’s a sparkle in her voice
As she tells me of her past
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Charlie F. Kane
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Lourdes Schopenhauer 05 August 2008

This is so much more than just a write of beauty. It holds a story as intriguing and hidden as the walls of a castle. I imagine her as a bird in act two. And you, becoming one of those ants. When I read it again the colors shift slightly, as in a rare kaleidoscope I cam move into. I truly enjoyed this write, talented one. Thank you.

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Charlie F. Kane

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