From Calm And Quiet Sanity Comments

The shackles of this grand design Are chains I cannot see And yet they check this life of mine Through false reality- - - -false reality, illusions.. we all live in illusions.......a life long.... it is very difficult to be freed from the illusions. and when we succede to get out of all illusions, then we experience the real...... tony a great poem indeed.

Wow! Stunning work...Bryan, it's so calmly written from an intricate mind. I vote 10++

(cont.) ...... How can I know if life is real Or really an illusion? ................................it IS an illusion! ! ! ! i got a tiny chuckle out of these lines. great job! ........ :) bri i think you are as great a poet as i, BRI, am. you are [ perhaps ] more serious.

(cont.) ..... to MyPoemList for sure! now to finish reading it. A victim of this mind mess Some might call insanity.................more great lines! and m/m/m ........i 'love' good alliterations AND..... (to be continued) .....

some favorite lines: Binding me with indecision's Deepening despair Blinding me with visions Of a world that isn't there ...........you've got the rhythm, rhyme, and it even is understandable! ! ! wow. ;) (to be continued) .........

A nice poetic imagination, Bryan. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

Absolutely true...a nice poem written with inner voice....thanks for sharing