Wednesday, February 6, 2019

From Bud To Blossom.........Excerpt....The Ecstatic Dance Of Soul Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am love held within the bud in shy,
I am love unfolding with the petals uncurling,
I am rich in a delight so ecstatic.
I am shy as the bud in me- struggles through the cracks.
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Jayita Bhattacharjee
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Kim Barney 27 January 2020

Very nice. My favorite line is the last one of stanza two, and I love the name Jayita. That's as pretty as your poem!

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Jayita Bhattacharjee 28 January 2020

I am glad you enjoyed it....Thank you so much....

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Jayita Bhattacharjee 08 March 2019

Thank you very much.

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Jennifer Birchall 19 February 2019

Showing your journey through growth, a lovely poem Jayita. Congratulations for potd, much deserved.

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Thank you very much......

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I am the bloom on murky waters, singing the song of this earthly life.. Lovely thought. Congrats being POD

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Thank you so much.....

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Prabalta Rijal 18 February 2019

Its a beautiful poem :)

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Khairul Ahsan 18 February 2019

The poet's ecstasy has blossomed into a beautiful flower through the lines of the poem, except that the words 'murky waters' have appeared in too many lines. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Benjamin Uy 18 February 2019

I am the splendor that fills the earth with passion for life A fine poem thanks *****

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You are very welcome....

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2019

" I am the beauty who wakes up to the riches of a dawn" ! Nice piece of work. πŸ§šβ€β™‚οΈπŸ§šβ€β™€οΈβ˜ΊπŸ˜€πŸ€—πŸŒ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks for your appreciation....

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 February 2019

YOU ARE ALL I I AND I ARE YOU A LIBRA BY ANY CHANCE ASK ME NOT WHY LIBRAS ARE THE ONLY ONES WHO DON'T SHY WHILE SAYING I AND IT'S BECAUSE A LIBRA ALONE IS WITH ONE EYE THE JUDGEMENT OUGHT TO BE FAIR SO JUST SAY AYE

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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 February 2019

Hats off to the wonderful flight of imagery and confidence evident through out the composition. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 February 2019

A great poem indeed. Like to read it again again. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.

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Bill Cantrell 18 February 2019

Very beautiful poem! Enjoyable to read and well deserved honor as poem of the day!

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Thanks a lot....

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Hassan Hayati 18 February 2019

even in the murky waters you can be the prettiest creature of the world, very meaningful, and deserving the tittle of POD. CONGRATULATIONS.

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Thank you....

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Rajnish Manga 18 February 2019

'I am the splendor that fills this earth with a passion for life'. This should be the mantra of life. Ups & downs should not deter us but prepare us for a life full of challenges. A motivational write. Thanks.

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Thank you. Glad you like it....

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 February 2019

I am the beauty who wakes up to the riches of a dawn. I am the one who rises to life from beneath the still waters. I am the heart who found a joy amidst the silent sobbing of dark. simply marvellous. fine, great. tony

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Thank you Tony....

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Jasbir Chatterjee 18 February 2019

Sheer poetry...Thanks for sharing it...Congrats on being poet of the day!

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Paul Brookes 18 February 2019

Beautifully composed life and love

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I am glad you enjoyed it....Thank you....

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Bharati Nayak 18 February 2019

I am the splendor that fills this earth with a passion for life. I am the tearful beauty dancing in waters, holding the hope in light. I am the soul that sings a melody across the hills and meadows. I am the faith that learned to rise through the murky waters of life.- - A great poem about hope, love and faith that are essential spirit of life.Congrats for being chosen POD.

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Thank you for your heartfelt appreciation...

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 February 2019

wow the whole; the entire world yeah, is ME- the LOVE a BUD to fragrant FLOWER spread the fragrance over the WHOLENESS of HEART................../// beautiful poem, I enjoyed fully

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Thank you so much....

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 February 2019

A wonderful prose poem, Jayita. Congrats for being selected...10++++++

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Jayita Bhattacharjee

Jayita Bhattacharjee

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