I am love held within the bud in shy,
I am love unfolding with the petals uncurling,
I am rich in a delight so ecstatic.
I am shy as the bud in me- struggles through the cracks.
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Showing your journey through growth, a lovely poem Jayita. Congratulations for potd, much deserved.
I am the bloom on murky waters, singing the song of this earthly life.. Lovely thought. Congrats being POD
The poet's ecstasy has blossomed into a beautiful flower through the lines of the poem, except that the words 'murky waters' have appeared in too many lines. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
I am the splendor that fills the earth with passion for life A fine poem thanks *****
" I am the beauty who wakes up to the riches of a dawn" ! Nice piece of work. π§ββοΈπ§ββοΈβΊππ€π Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
YOU ARE ALL I I AND I ARE YOU A LIBRA BY ANY CHANCE ASK ME NOT WHY LIBRAS ARE THE ONLY ONES WHO DON'T SHY WHILE SAYING I AND IT'S BECAUSE A LIBRA ALONE IS WITH ONE EYE THE JUDGEMENT OUGHT TO BE FAIR SO JUST SAY AYE
Hats off to the wonderful flight of imagery and confidence evident through out the composition. Congrats on poem of the Day.
A great poem indeed. Like to read it again again. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.
Very beautiful poem! Enjoyable to read and well deserved honor as poem of the day!
even in the murky waters you can be the prettiest creature of the world, very meaningful, and deserving the tittle of POD. CONGRATULATIONS.
'I am the splendor that fills this earth with a passion for life'. This should be the mantra of life. Ups & downs should not deter us but prepare us for a life full of challenges. A motivational write. Thanks.
I am the beauty who wakes up to the riches of a dawn. I am the one who rises to life from beneath the still waters. I am the heart who found a joy amidst the silent sobbing of dark. simply marvellous. fine, great. tony
Sheer poetry...Thanks for sharing it...Congrats on being poet of the day!
I am the splendor that fills this earth with a passion for life. I am the tearful beauty dancing in waters, holding the hope in light. I am the soul that sings a melody across the hills and meadows. I am the faith that learned to rise through the murky waters of life.- - A great poem about hope, love and faith that are essential spirit of life.Congrats for being chosen POD.
wow the whole; the entire world yeah, is ME- the LOVE a BUD to fragrant FLOWER spread the fragrance over the WHOLENESS of HEART................../// beautiful poem, I enjoyed fully
A wonderful prose poem, Jayita. Congrats for being selected...10++++++
Very nice. My favorite line is the last one of stanza two, and I love the name Jayita. That's as pretty as your poem!
I am glad you enjoyed it....Thank you so much....