Friday, October 25, 2019

From Blue To Green Comments

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I am out of the way a little but still on the road
moving with you with your love as a heavy load.
What a love is it I can't see your hidden face
why don't we talk just feel a glittering glace?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 November 2019

Why don't you turn your face and look at me am I still a stranger or a stranger you see? A beautiful dialogue with God, Akhtar Sahab! I ask the same questions.....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 October 2019

A very perceptive and thought provoking poem. The relationship between man and God is always a mystery. A beautiful poem brilliantly penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

Superb just excellent the poem is A conversation between HIM and ye BOTH STRANGERS YE but believe I must AJ JI SIR THEE YOU are more knowledgeable than me PP ME

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Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2019

Free translation of my Urdu poem " Wuh" (That someone, thouh wuh is an English word as well, meaningful and a little relevant to this poem) , specially translated for my dear friend me poet yeps poet.

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