From Blossoms Comments

in the time of happiness it seems that no death can come and defeat us but happiness is not friend's of eternity; poetic diction is very transparent; nice to read

4) I have enjoyed tremendously this brilliant poem, beautifully worded and to be pondered upon. CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Amazing!

3) Perfect and sweetly said, the subject reminds of other Asian poems I have read, the subject is mostly fruits or flowers and the philosophical intention.5 Stars Top Score, dear Poet.

2) Continued: the subject is oftentimes a fruit or flowers, in your poem it is about peaches, a true subject for eastern poems.

IU like the poem very much, I was also born in Jakarta and now a dutch resident and poetess. Your poem reminds me of the Asian-Chinese traditional poetry,

Tyrographical error. The third line '' we bought from the joy'' should read ''we bought from the boy''.

The person who told me of this poem must now be a friend for life...