Sunday, September 6, 2020

From Beyond The Grave Comments

Rating: 5.0

I get along with
my father now,
better than when he was alive
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Kurt Philip Behm
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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 September 2020

A well crafted poem. Truly excellent....10++++++

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Terry Craddock 06 September 2020

I love the free flowing verse, especially the stanza 'The walls have dismantled, the barriers down, a clear vision to inside' I believe a Father Son disconnect was common in our generation, when nothing we did was good enough and praise was never given, only fault found if even the smallest fault could be found. My father mellowed at 83 and we are now friends now he is 86. We went out for a Father's Day meal yesterday at a restaurant over looking the sea.

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