Tuesday, January 2, 2007

From Behind This Dusty Window Comments

Rating: 5.0

yesterday unraveled into a sky that looked like
a bruise, and we call it today because it lacks
originality and life, and the sun still tries to shine
from out behind this dusty window pane
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Ben Partenay
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H L 03 January 2007

A little bit haunting but very well written

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Patti Masterman 03 January 2007

Thank you for this. I discovered you last week and I am so glad. Your writing is always fresh and ingenious.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 02 January 2007

Dormant is a good word for life but your talent is far from that. This is a brilliant piece of writing, sky bruised & yesterday unraveled even. Love it!

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