Of the rainbow
With all the colors
Our faces
Deceivingly shimmer
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What a beautiful write, positive thoughts written so well 10 Lynda xx
You are so right! We need to be positive and ride on our rainbows of happiness. Just so poetically beautiful. 10 Karin Anderson
You write remarkably, Nightingale... fine optimism - illness of poets. I am ill from this too... / with a smile.../ 10.. Best wishes, Tsira
A musical message of trust and redemption. There will always be hope as long as there are rainbows. Lovely... Warm regards, Sandra
sir, fantastic. this made me believe and smile
Colours of life should be found in ourselves and showed out to everyone on the Earth, as components of our wonderful ways of being: a beautiful diversity of beings in one single planet.10!
a hopeful and beautiful poem in it you spoke my thoughts for today..excellent one..10++++
Much to my surprise, this turned out to be a brief, terse, and well written poem, P. N. Your style conveyed your message very well. Carl.
P.N. YOUR POEM WA S EVERY SHORT BUT YOU SAID ALOT WITH A BIG PUNCH WILL BE READING MORE SOON.
So very true - we all shimmer with colours of aura and if only we could see the beauty we would never need black hearts..... this is a refreshing and positive verse which has it's own message. Love it.... and 10 from Fay...
excellent imagery! 10+