Thursday, June 4, 2009

From Basic Black To The Whole Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of the rainbow
With all the colors
Our faces
Deceivingly shimmer
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 June 2009

excellent imagery! 10+

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Lynda Robson 08 June 2009

What a beautiful write, positive thoughts written so well 10 Lynda xx

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You are so right! We need to be positive and ride on our rainbows of happiness. Just so poetically beautiful. 10 Karin Anderson

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Tsira Goge 05 June 2009

You write remarkably, Nightingale... fine optimism - illness of poets. I am ill from this too... / with a smile.../ 10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 04 June 2009

A musical message of trust and redemption. There will always be hope as long as there are rainbows. Lovely... Warm regards, Sandra

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sir, fantastic. this made me believe and smile

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Beautiful and full of hope..a ten from me.

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Linda Hepner 04 June 2009

Is English your first language?

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Meggie Gultiano 04 June 2009

a nice inspiring message here.thanks for sharing

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M M 04 June 2009

Colours of life should be found in ourselves and showed out to everyone on the Earth, as components of our wonderful ways of being: a beautiful diversity of beings in one single planet.10!

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a hopeful and beautiful poem in it you spoke my thoughts for today..excellent one..10++++

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Carl Harris 04 June 2009

Much to my surprise, this turned out to be a brief, terse, and well written poem, P. N. Your style conveyed your message very well. Carl.

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Gayle Anne Goff 04 June 2009

P.N. YOUR POEM WA S EVERY SHORT BUT YOU SAID ALOT WITH A BIG PUNCH WILL BE READING MORE SOON.

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Fay Slimm 04 June 2009

So very true - we all shimmer with colours of aura and if only we could see the beauty we would never need black hearts..... this is a refreshing and positive verse which has it's own message. Love it.... and 10 from Fay...

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