From Basic Black To The Whole Rainbow Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

From Basic Black To The Whole Rainbow

Rating: 5.0


Of the rainbow
With all the colors
Our faces
Deceivingly shimmer

People black their hearts
Of night
The hope
Dimmer

Let’s look
At the sky
Still stars trustfully
Glimmer

(2009/6/4)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

sir, fantastic. this made me believe and smile

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Beautiful and full of hope..a ten from me.

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Linda Hepner 04 June 2009

Is English your first language?

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Meggie Gultiano 04 June 2009

a nice inspiring message here.thanks for sharing

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M M 04 June 2009

Colours of life should be found in ourselves and showed out to everyone on the Earth, as components of our wonderful ways of being: a beautiful diversity of beings in one single planet.10!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 June 2009

excellent imagery! 10+

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Lynda Robson 08 June 2009

What a beautiful write, positive thoughts written so well 10 Lynda xx

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You are so right! We need to be positive and ride on our rainbows of happiness. Just so poetically beautiful. 10 Karin Anderson

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Tsira Goge 05 June 2009

You write remarkably, Nightingale... fine optimism - illness of poets. I am ill from this too... / with a smile.../ 10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 04 June 2009

A musical message of trust and redemption. There will always be hope as long as there are rainbows. Lovely... Warm regards, Sandra

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