'I met her at school
Where I was very cool
She was the clumsy girl
Who finally invaded my world:
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great job expressing yourself good job keep iit up
a very good poem..a very touching verses and the context had been well expressed a nice piece to read..well done...
beautifully and full of emotions. thank you for caring and thank you for sharing
Poem has much depth of feelings, for such a short love that became tragic.
I have felt some of the same similies in my own life, enjoyed your work
A touching poem showing how tragic love can be. But in the end its all you have. love is life to me.