Whatever ink cartographers wield
to tease the ridge of a mountain
from the ambient edge of the sky
puddles under the cleats of my son
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Wowww as u picture your son with dreams of his future and you watching his life unfold, you express and relate the feel awesomely in great poetic eloquence. I liked the mention of Icarus to the features. Kudos. Pls plz do review/ comment my newest poem too, titled, " Llama drama ' maybe it will give u a chuckle..
Very nice and a meaningful write. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting.
Such beautiful heart and soul meet together in this! .. Ever so inspiring! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++