From Above Comments

Hey, this is well written! ! ! From Above He can control our living...

hey, ODC! thanks so much for sharing your insight, you talented young poet! i'm not a religous person but i am very spiritual... i do believe in a loving god and i think he would smile down upon you hearing this poem!

Hope is a word on which this world runs.Good one.

God's benevolence & ur innocence are unquestionable!

Though you are young, your thoughts are very much high at this age. You are so well matured and proved yourself a good writer.