I’ve been holding your hand for far too long now
- your palm is hot as a swamp
- your thick fingers turn my knuckles white
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Excellent, Kim. Not a thing wrong with this one.Says one who liked it a lot. H
Well said, this is great. I think we all have father issues, especially us daughters. Excellently said. I swear the poetry on this site is getting better. Thanks for helping.
Great poem. I am beginning to think that you constantly stand in the shadow of an abusive or harsh boyfriend or relative.