Sunday, January 30, 2005

From A Pond Comments

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I’ve been holding your hand for far too long now
- your palm is hot as a swamp
- your thick fingers turn my knuckles white
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Kim McInnis
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Matthew Hyatt 12 March 2005

Great poem. I am beginning to think that you constantly stand in the shadow of an abusive or harsh boyfriend or relative.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 January 2005

Excellent, Kim. Not a thing wrong with this one.Says one who liked it a lot. H

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Sandra Osborne 30 January 2005

Well said, this is great. I think we all have father issues, especially us daughters. Excellently said. I swear the poetry on this site is getting better. Thanks for helping.

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Kim McInnis

Kim McInnis

LaSalle Ontario
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