From A. Palazzeschi - The Sick Fountain Comments

Producing sounds and exclaimations in words is not easy, this piece succeeds in its meaning and expression,10+

Very creative and different from all i have read.....Lovely! ! ! Cate

Oh, yes, this is 'The Sick Fountain', you have mentioned, commenting the new Tick-Tock-ing poem of David Desantis! Yes - it is a resemblance and both poems are very good. Well done!