From A Lover To His Lover Comments
In the wilderness look at the ray of light
In the far distance, of new dawn when i can see the first sight
Overwhelm me in the embrace of thy frightful love
before fetters bound me in the horrid darkness of the night
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Wow very enchanting and rhyming all well.Words structured beautifully.
clearly very well structured and thought out, it really amplifies the passion
Wow, there is no denying the passion in this poem, its palpable. I agree with the other commentors on here, the rhyming and structure are great. Thank you for sharing with us :)
I agree with Rita, reading this reminds me of Shakespeare work. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem
As the other poets mentioned it is an extremely passionate poem, and I find it has rich vivid imagery as well as rhyme. You have written it with longing and I can see you have put a lot of time in to writing it as well. 10 Karin Anderson
nice poem...very passionate...n shows an unrestricted side of urs...moving ahead...just listening to ur heart..gud write: -)
Extremely well written, I love the passion, so raw yet so structured it was amazingly beautiful
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7/20/2025 10:32:01 PM # 1.0.0
One word.. Beautifull!