Saturday, April 21, 2012

From A King To A Clown Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now that you are no longer around,
I feel like a King without a crown
Or a clown with a happy face,
Making everybody laugh in town
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Romeo Della Valle
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Pheko Motaung 02 May 2012

That's one mighty heart moving crash! From the ivory tower of kingly majesty to the puppet toy of a clown! Yuh fantastic brother.Thanks

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Judy Ponceby 29 April 2012

Very expressive. The transition from king to clown is very moving....as a sad clown pulls at the heartstrings.

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Neela Nath Das 29 April 2012

You are still the king, the king of your crystal heart! Very pure.The poem has a telltale effect.I like it.

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Heather Wilson 26 April 2012

Oh, that is so, so sad, but such an expressive poem, so heartfelt and well written.I`m sure you will rise back to a King very quickly.

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

Dominican Republic
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