Thursday, April 30, 2009

Fringes Of Hope. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Torn as it's edge is, I have sworn always
To apprehend hope. Glazed with eyes blinded
By hurt, hope only can bind up loose frays
And render the future reasonably kind.
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Gibson 10 May 2009

When all is lost and no one around your heartbeat, the only sound In the blackest hole the smallest light Hope! give's the strength to fight love the title! Fringes of Hope,

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Muhammad Ali 08 May 2009

Energizer.......! ! precious poem dear Fay! 10.. Ali

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Juneil Sechico 02 May 2009

nice one Fay! very fresh! 10 from me....

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Tsira Goge 30 April 2009

Fay, Remarkable poem... Unfortunately, the hope not always is the reliable... But I'm no corrected optimist... 10... /Thank you.../ Tsira

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Fiona Davidson 30 April 2009

Wonderful imagery Fay...and an excellent poem...as always in your own inimitable style...Fi 10+++

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Susan Jarvis 30 April 2009

An excellent extended metaphor - love the fringes, frays and unravellings - and the message is spot on. S ;)

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this was well said.. as expected from Fay.

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Fay Slimm

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