Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Frigid Warmth Comments

Rating: 4.1

Your warm body lies next to me
Yet emits such a frigid chill
I try to cuddle, comfort you
You play asleep, and just lay still
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Wendy Bureau
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Bob Gibson 08 June 2009

The emptiness felt with this soul beside you a stranger lies a pace away the night is long with no love inside you begging sleep to come your way A lot of depth in this wonderfully worded poem

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Laurie Hill 03 April 2009

Such a sadness and chill felt by these words.this captures it so well 10+

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Sandra Fowler 29 March 2009

A poem of pervasive sadness. Your title is excellent and the content of your poem does not disappoint. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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