Friday, June 24, 2011

Frightening Crawl Comments

Rating: 3.0

The time is crawling around the midday
and the nails under the heels are engraving in the head.
Heavy rain is taking the night and the day
the sea is cracking in the brain who is deeply interred in the grass
And the monkeys, which under the foot.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 24 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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AbdelAziz Alhaider

AbdelAziz Alhaider

within the time of the sad creation
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