Friendships Poem by Tobias Vireo

Friendships

Rating: 5.0

It begins with a smile, a friendly wave.
Hanging out, sharing everything.
We grow close, and our bond deepens.
But it breaks with fights, name calling, assumptions.
We end up in pity, anger, and shame.
Our friendships come and go,
And all that remains are the hurt and the lies.
Even if they were small,
The lies still hurt,
Every single one of them.
Maybe they were just jokes,
or maybe not.
(edited with help)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 September 2023

**** GLUM: 'glum glŭm adjective Moody and melancholy; dejected. Gloomy; dismal.' I used 'glum' in a comment which may NOT have been sent by PH to this poem from me. : ( bri : )

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Eli Forrest 05 September 2023

er what?

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Bri Edwards 02 September 2023

IF YOU DON'T FIND ABOUT 5 COMMENTS HERE FROM ME IN SEVERAL DAYS, LET ME KNOW, PLEASE. PH IS sometimes SLOW! Welcome 'new poet' to PH. : ) bri

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