Saturday, July 9, 2011

Friendship Took For Granted Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our love was something you implored for
I would rather have had it ignored though
I tried to feel what you did 
But let's face it - i'm in love with another kid 
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Zoby Cristal
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Monalisa' on page 1.

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