Friendship Part 2 Comments

Beautiful sequel to your earlier poem on Friendship...you have a very romantic and straightforward writing style...10+ again

'hello......... my goshhhhh. she made me say my gosh and blush for she said im fitting of her luscious heart' should ve added posh and cushion, anyway very refreshing and relaxing poem indeed..thanks 10++

A good sequel to your first Friendship piece and a novel way to present a collaboration work - - again you both say how it is from the heart so a very sweet and romantic lilt to the verse - - keep writing and a top mark from me....10 + ++ Fay