Friendship Is And Can Be Comments

Lovely piece of poetry that captures the essence of friendship, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Someone just sent me a message and said that I should point out exactly what the mistakes are, so here we go... line 4 should have NEEDS instead of NEED line 32 There is no need for a comma: Friendship is to share the joy and the fear line 33 someone to run TO, not TOO lines 36,37 and 38 FRIENDSHIP, not FREINDSHIP line 38 THESE things, not THES things Last line: You are mixing singular and plural pronouns. We all have ONE (singular) ... long time to find THEM (plural) . Should be: long time to find HIM or HER. I hope this is helpful. There could be others I overlooked. I'm not perfect either and am starting to get dyslexic in my old age, at least in my typing. I think I have typed something, and when I check I find that my fingers have been on the wrong keys or I have just put the letters in the wrong order.

There at least four mistakes in grammar or spelling, but all the thoughts of the poem are very good. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day on January 16 for the second year in a row!

In spite of all the errors, the poem does sound very good; seems to be pretty exhaustive and does not leave out anything...

So long journey come to an catastrophe. The alchemy of friendship perhaps yet unfinished to come to an inference by some other poets. Abstract is always abstract. Feelings can not be judged by conditions...... here lies the tragedy, perhaps.

The poem is beautiful. I feel so happy that I've found my true best friend in a place I've never expected. Thank you God for blessing me with Haya. (my friend's name)

At the age of 66, I'm still waiting..... ! ! !

This poem is so true, i cant wait to find my best friend!

Nobody has noticed that friendship is spelled incorrectly in the last lines. This says a lot.

that one is really GREAT! thumbs up!

well done, Djean, keep up with your writing; I congratulate you on your immense courage! Sometimes certain friendships arouse so strong feelings that it is prudent to just give them up...

great poem very true

Wonderful Poem. I mean it touches the heart Thanks! ! ! !

i love your poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Hi, nice piece.. I really like this sentence 'To have a true Friend is the best thing to achieve'.. yes i guess that's truth. Really Friendship is rare.

thats great.it really is true and practical.keep it up