Monday, July 18, 2016

Friendship In The Frontier Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dry breeze wafted along the barbed wire;
The men in a spire; the scenery dire,
A handful of innocent children came near
To touch a lonely flower, to them very dear.
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Ca.venkat Velavan 23 April 2017

Superb

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Ca.venkat Velavan 23 April 2017

Superb

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Chinedu Dike 18 July 2016

Good portrayal of unusual blend of friendship and animosity in the frontier, well articulated and nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Fathima. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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