Monday, March 15, 2021

Friendship Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

I said hello to
That man in the bus shelter
I hope you don't mind
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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David Wood 10 December 2021

You have to read it a few times to appreciate its value. Friendship, compassion, kindness and even jealousy.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2021

So good this token of friendship. Excellent gesture.

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M.J. Lemon 16 March 2021

Brilliant, LeeAnn...this verse evokes, in one reading, compassion. Jealousy in another. Brilliant!

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M Asim Nehal 16 March 2021

Full Stars....*****

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M Asim Nehal 16 March 2021

Sure, so long as you can bring smile to someone's face. Great Satire on society.

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Kostas Lagos 16 March 2021

I won't mind reading this poem again. Great work

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Captain Cur 15 March 2021

A unsheltered write! The suffering homeless tend to be ignored by our lack of humanity. The problem will only get worse due to unemployment. There but for the grace of God go I.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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