Friday, January 4, 2019

Friendship Comments

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I sought a friendship with the wind.
I merely stood at the center of a circle
I imagined into being. I slowly rotated,
bowing briefly to each of the Four Directions.
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Bharati Nayak 25 September 2020

A great poem about friendship- -our closeness to nature and how we travel with nature as one being.Let me quote from this wonderful poem- - " Immediately I felt a soft breeze touch my face and cover my body with lilac scent. The wind had answered my summons. She had witnessed my renewal and displayed her welcoming " Yes" to our friendship in touch and truth. Henceforth, we travel the earth as one being." I hope this poem forms part of our book.

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M Asim Nehal 28 January 2019

Superb Poem! ! ! ! ! None can be better friend than time, all will leave and pass by but only time will remain.10+++

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Richard Wlodarski 04 January 2019

Wow! An absolutely brilliant tribute to the mystery of time. And such a precious friendship with the wind. Daniel, it's always such a pleasure reading your poetry.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2019

Mystery of time absorbs day by day and time to time every change comes and it is also absorbed. Merely standing at the circle we can see and judge upon life. Friendship is precious and this has gentle touch and kind touch for all of us. Soft breeze motivates mind. A nice poem is beautifully penned and this is an excellent poem on friendship.

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