Friendship Comments

Can u tell me…………….Who is she……………………… She loves Red Roses She is in different Poses Looking like a Blue Butter Fly If u will see her…she will shy who is she………………. Her nature is very love full Always her face is smile full She worked as Reporter Now she is good writer …. Who is she…………… She like the bird Pigeon…. Which can fly out of region If u try to catch..it will fly away. If u like it, Pigeon will near by… who is she…………… If u don’t understand yet….. I will tell u She is my, darling Nabila.i love u

its indeed a fine one but get loosen in the middle lines u crafted good images with fine colors but humbly suggest to make balance while stroking every line should reinforce other so to bring a cohesive view.... for example 3rd stanza and 4th one blurring the picture...... i feel lil bit lose of controle here and no doubt last stanza is much stronger and bold.... good attempt.....

simple theme. beautiful!

written in a soothing style it flows so sweet.keep inking nabila