Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Friendship Comments

Rating: 5.0

Friendship - a seamless sky
Far too complex to gauge or delve.
At times like the early rays of morn
It fills one with joy.
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2020

About friendship you have delineated a beautiful and meaningful poem. At times like the early rays of morn friendship fills one with joy. At times like a gentle breeze it cuddles and cossets. In darkness, it burns like a candle. In loneliness, a sweet presence. Thanks for sharing.

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Vaibhav Simha 28 April 2020

A worthwhile read again. You sure are, at least ostensibly, someone who delves into nature, for in almost all the poems I have read, you attribute some aspect of it to nature: that has become a defining feature of your poetry. The part starring the rainbow and a beacon is my favourite.

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Friendship, it is great on your part to create a poem on friendship without losing even a bit of it's eloquence, beauty and greatness. Friendship means all positives put together. It is of course fond memory and a lingering scent. Thank you Valsa George.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

Friendship is like a candle that shows light is darkness. Friendship carries deep love and affection. Re-visiting such a lovely poem we feel glad. This has deep value within...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

In darkness, it burns like a candle. In loneliness, a sweet presence. At times so silent At times so very eloquent Finally like an unfinished tale A fond memory A lingering scent Like the life - sustaining breath It remains…..! .. .. nice theme. It is a beautiful poem on friendship with eloquent depiction. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 July 2016

It cuddles and cossets! ! Nice piece of work.

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Queeny Gona 11 June 2016

The beauty of friendship and the joy in hanging around with friends is so lovely presented in this read of yours dear Mam. Now on reading this muse of yrs everyone wanted to know where they actually fit in the list.

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Bri Edwards 25 February 2016

where do i fit into all of this, my fiend.......i mean friend? ? bri :)

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Loke Kok Yee 20 October 2015

Kipling says one man in a thousand will stick closer than a brother and it's worthwhile seeking him all your life if you find him before the other Valsa says in darkness it burns like a candle Two wise poets! -10+10

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Akhtar Jawad 12 December 2014

The lovely poem is a preface of a book on friendship......................10

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Walterrean Salley 07 November 2014

A concrete and accurate assessment when it comes to friendship, one of life's most important relations.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 October 2014

This is so wonderfully written with amazing words.....Valsa.....I am speechless.......really a great piece...10/10

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 08 July 2012

Beautifully written poem on friendship, but friends are the people who hurt us more in life, sometimes..

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