Friendship Comments

This is a fantasic poem, and you're an exceptional poet. please write some more, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

It is hard for me to believe that you are only 14. There are a lot of people on this site who cannot write with the kind of rhythm and rhyme that you wrote this. They say that we should offer encouragement to young writers so they will continue to work on their craft. For me to give you encouragement is like giving heat to the sun. You don't need encouragement. You need a book deal for your poetry. You are the best writher of rhythm and rhyme poetry that I have seen at your age. I congratelate you young lady. I'm selecting you poem as one of my favorites so I can see if there are any hidden flaws in it someday when I have more time. But as it is, It was outstanding. I gave it a rare 10 from me. GW62