Thursday, May 8, 2008

Friendship Comments

Rating: 4.6

Standing by,
All the way.
Here to help you through your day.
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Lisa Engleman
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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2013

A superb write on friendship.10/10. 'Just being there, Through thick and thin, All just to say, you are my friend' Just in four triplets, you have described friendship so well!

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Sid John Gardner. 28 November 2008

Great writing...So much in so few words.Friends are here on this site thats for sure. Sid xxx

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You have defined the crux of friendship in a few lines. Great work dear. Keep up your good work. With hearty wishes....

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C. P. Sharma 09 May 2008

Simplicity of diction and the flow of the poem are impressive. A very good attempt. Keep it up.

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Pradeep Pathak 09 May 2008

If anybody knows the meaning of friendship and love then he can say that he is the best.....nice writing...! ! !

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Sid John Gardner. 09 May 2008

Hi Lisa, Friends are important.Sometimes we get them mixed up with something else as I have recently.A very nice poem.

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Broken Peaces 09 May 2008

What a lovely world it would be if there were more people like you around, nice message 10 Chris

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Catching your tears, When you cry. Hey Lisa a very much 10.0+ stuff hugs-rehan

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Nkululeko Mdudu 09 May 2008

You are indeed a true friend, and you know what it means to be so. it may be a sweet and a nice poem; but what matters to me is that it is true and real in its application. well done! -nkuli

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Sallie Howson 08 May 2008

very sweet.-i hope your friends apreciate it

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Vidi Writes 08 May 2008

This poem reminds me of this quote.. 'We cannot tell the exact moment a friendship is formed; As in filling a vessel dropp by drop, There is at last a dropp which makes it run over; So in a series of kindnesses, There is at last one that makes the heart run over.” You have written about all those drops Which finally form the good friendship. Good one. Enjoyed.

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Stone Granite 08 May 2008

Lisa - very nice and sweet poem. It's nice in its simplicity and I find it could apply to many other important things to us, such as a parent to a child. Well done.

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Will P. Litter 08 May 2008

How nice of a poem you've written, most indeed!

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