Saturday, February 25, 2006
Friends Will Last Long Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Seldom speaking, seldom smiling…
Always looking up in the ceiling…
Carrying the problems of their aching heart…
Because their minds are often apart…
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9/14/2025 8:19:42 PM # 1.0.0
There is a lot of truth in what you say...your friends would do well to listen :) I have read a few of your poems, and you show great promise. You are, however, falling into the 'trap' of rhyming for the sake of rhyme. This work would have been far superior as a piece of heartfelt prose...it would have meant more. Just write from the heart...if it rhyme it rhymes, if it doesn't, it doesn't! A good effort, and I wish you well in the future...keep writing :) Best wishes :) Jack.