Friends Of Progress Comments

I liked the last line.

'they persuaded success onto our path' i like this part best, thx for sharing.

Friends of progress encouraging others to move forward on the road to progress, how beautiful those words of the piece express that.

Wow! ! ...how creative you are...your poems are really great! ! ....you are a wonderfull writer Abdullah...i loved this piece so much...it is so profound =)

We climbed our dream in their laid soul and drained our sadness in their weep then molded happiness .................... I love these lines..A great piece.