Friends, Love, Life Comments
In all honesty, you are beautiful
Despite the backlash
Between the mind and that beating drum
Slipped, tripped, fell in
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Nice way of putting that one loves is like being confronted with heaven itself. Nice way of putting this idea across. Great lines.
very nice poem! beautifully written! keep it up! my vote is 7.Enjoyed it
real or the true lovers are the ones who their souls have joined together in a body.and can not be fallen apart by words. nicely piece of written.10+++++
Friends all over the world....yeah, it's also strange for me(I mean the lines: A dramatic change of feelings Agonizing pain of lovely memories A friendship changed, Through the cause of one word Between two others Still it's a mystery for me that how a word can ruin a relation between two friends those were close to each other for years? a great work well done
Kevin, this may be my favourite so far! Especially the last stanza! The discovery of your new felt bond, and joy described beautifully. Perfect!
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8/3/2025 5:16:56 AM # 1.0.0
Love the painted picture in this one. Continue shining light on this world