Monday, November 9, 2015

Friends: Jack C. Dental And Jon Purpose …..[long; Fiction; Friends Growing Up; Life] Comments

Rating: 5.0

In neighboring hospitals (on the same day) Jon and Jack were born.
Jon came out with no complications, while Jack’s mother was accidentally torn ….
by Jack’s unusually large head before his mom was …..fully-dilated.
Her distress was so great that the doctor had Jack’s mom sedated.
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Mj Lemon 06 December 2015

This is a great one. Don't know why, but it reminds me of a John Cougar song....And it looks awesome in the showcase.

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Jak Black 18 November 2015

This is a long one, Bri. Felt sorry for Jack's mum, poor thing. Don't think it's all fiction though, surely there must be an element of truth in there somewhere. Don't suppose as many retain their childhood friendships these days, so many people have to up sticks and move away.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 November 2015

most would have stopped at the fourth stanza but i with great determination read it through it is one of the loveliest poem by far on a friendship that proved true thanks Bri-10+++

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