First shimmering light I arose
Seeing a bunch of lovely rose;
Sun smiling through the window
Over the trees dangling bough
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sure sir....they were the ones who partied.......very well written sir........and thanks for taking time to read mine.iam grateful.......
the last two lines of your poems reminds robert frost's 'miles to go before i sleep, miles to go before i sleep' nice poem covering elements of the sky above
I like the way you remember your freinds in the sky as I often do with the stars. Your writing is easily understood by following the rhyme which I certainly find more enjoyable to read as well as write. well done 10
I enjoyed this poem! The sky existed before humans came to this earth, - has been a continous source of entertaiment for mankind! You will perhaps like to read my -Visions Of The Vast Blue Emphyrean. -Raj Nandy
friends in the sky....they come as stars at night to see how we r doing...do hav a look at them n u can see them smile back at u.... good write sir
beautifull write........ uve expressed the feeling so easily..... its touching how v have frnds in the sky..... true....... cheers to u.......10/10..
nothing comforts like nature.it has healing powers you just have to make a connection. i too have friends in the sky from whom i draw strength.
...A good poem indeed.Though simple in theme a poetic grace accompanies each line.I have enjoyed it and given a flat 10 as my vote tribute.. keep writing friend.
celestial wonders... beautifully protrayed