Sunday, March 16, 2008

! Friends In The Sky Comments

Rating: 3.2

First shimmering light I arose
Seeing a bunch of lovely rose;
Sun smiling through the window
Over the trees dangling bough
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Vidyadhar Durgekar
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Chitra - 19 December 2008

celestial wonders... beautifully protrayed

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

sure sir....they were the ones who partied.......very well written sir........and thanks for taking time to read mine.iam grateful.......

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 September 2008

A nice poem with nice imagery.10+

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Shalini Kts 29 August 2008

the last two lines of your poems reminds robert frost's 'miles to go before i sleep, miles to go before i sleep' nice poem covering elements of the sky above

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David Threadgold 13 July 2008

I like the way you remember your freinds in the sky as I often do with the stars. Your writing is easily understood by following the rhyme which I certainly find more enjoyable to read as well as write. well done 10

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Raj Nandy 06 July 2008

I enjoyed this poem! The sky existed before humans came to this earth, - has been a continous source of entertaiment for mankind! You will perhaps like to read my -Visions Of The Vast Blue Emphyrean. -Raj Nandy

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Aswathi Nair K 29 June 2008

friends in the sky....they come as stars at night to see how we r doing...do hav a look at them n u can see them smile back at u.... good write sir

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Priyanka Shetty 09 June 2008

beautifull write........ uve expressed the feeling so easily..... its touching how v have frnds in the sky..... true....... cheers to u.......10/10..

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Mamta Agarwal 10 May 2008

nothing comforts like nature.it has healing powers you just have to make a connection. i too have friends in the sky from whom i draw strength.

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...A good poem indeed.Though simple in theme a poetic grace accompanies each line.I have enjoyed it and given a flat 10 as my vote tribute.. keep writing friend.

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Tsira Goge 19 March 2008

Vidyadhar, Beautiful poems...

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Subbaraman N V 16 March 2008

We enjoy the company of sun and moon, stars and birds!

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