Monday, September 17, 2018

Friends From An Enemy Country Comments

Rating: 5.0

Friends are here as well
and they are lovely and nice.
Friends I have all over the world,
from countries that are neither friendly
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Akhtar Jawad
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Jagdish Singh Ramána 23 April 2020

- - " Maiñ te meri jaan shaudaai ikko jahe Doveiñ aeñ nadān shaudāi ikko jahe." S.Sartaaj

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 23 April 2020

The pigeon will sour over the two! AMEEN! " Assiñ larr v laine a pichhoñ bollī dā Phir mannan ate manaun da mauqa tohli da, Hind te Pakistān shaudāi ikko jahe Doveiñ aeñ nadān shaudāi ikko jahe." - Dr. Satinder Sartaaj

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2018

On a tree of love with new green leaves and multicolor flowers birds will sing and dance together and we all shall see an incarnated dove, crowned as the queen of lasting love.......nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thank you dear Jawad Ji for sharing this gem.10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 September 2018

O ho ho! Akhtar Sahab! This is a wonderful poem that crosses man made boundaries. May your words come true! On a tree of love with new green leaves and multicolor flowers birds will sing and dance together A great poem of friendship with a beautiful image.........10

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 September 2018

sing and dance together work together believe together live together love together ...... united soul the friendship is no enemy think everyone please

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 September 2018

What greatest celebrations, no more hate or enemies, only friends and peace to find on both sides. This is absolutely true, love teaches us satisfactory freedom in peace in all parts on all sides of the world. Jesus Christ is the only Teacher and Lecturer Who teaches us mankind a peaceful world without war or enemies only because the pure love for one another. An excellent poem sublimest, Sir! This poem goes toMyPoemList A 10++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 September 2018

contd... till 18 then they find another one...their soul-mate kinda one..and go moms also get abandoned.. later moms become alone..they reverts to elderly ones... gals of her age... come meet we must on life's stage... this life is like one in a cage... we came out of a pairs rage...contd pt 3

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 September 2018

The western world survives on friends only.... very few have any or many relatives... all marry from world's vast community...different countries nationalities cultures only..the kids when they come... parents have aged and old become....mostly older than 40...so they kids have fewer siblings or none.. most wives their hubbies abandon... as men need more than do women... while moms look after mostly two sons...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 September 2018

The western world survives on friends only.... very few have any or many relatives... all marry from world's vast community...different countries nationalities cultures only..the kids when they come... parents have aged and old become....mostly older than 40...so they kids have fewer siblings or none......CONTD..

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Kelly Kurt 18 September 2018

Our leaders should be required to be poets.: -) Peace!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 September 2018

A wonderful poem on friendship that conquers boundaries and race. All lines of this poem convey beautiful thoughts and sentiments that foster unity and brotherhood. Beautifully crafted . Superbly penned.10+++ and on to my Poem List.

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Rajnish Manga 17 September 2018

Just read 'The Treasure Of Life' a poem by Olive Walters. Following lines convey the same message quite eloquently: With many a set back / We'll find hard to bear It's love and true friendship / That will help us to care

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Rajnish Manga 17 September 2018

A lovely poem devoted to love and friendship which go beyond territorial boundaries. Let us hope these sentiments become a reality soon. Amen! Thanks, Akhtar sahab.

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Bharati Nayak 17 September 2018

These amazing friends make me sure love is above all the hates, and one day these friendships will rise as the clouds. It will rain on both sides It will wash the dirt of hate. On a tree of love with new green leaves and multicolor flowers birds will sing and dance together and we all shall see an incarnated dove, crowned as the queen of lasting love. - - - - - - What an amazing poem! My thought resonates with this very thought.

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Aqua Flower 17 September 2018

Beautifully said....the last two lines ending this wonderfully written poem sums it up perfectly! Thank you for shring this and many hope one day your poem will come true.

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