Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Friends Forever And Beyond.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blessings in disguise when your mother set eyes on you the first time
Your sweet smile, captured your fathers heart, and says he is mine
Happy couple celebrated and cheered
The world around you watched patiently as you grow
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Bel Claveria Carig Martinez 19 January 2012

Thank you Rajendran Muthiah....it's actually a last minute Poem for a friend whom celebrated his birthday Yesterday,18/01/2012....and thought as a gift for him, perhaps in time the more I write the better will improve

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Rajendran Muthiah 18 January 2012

Remember your past. It has made of you better today. Wonderful! The inherent themes in all of your poems are not obsolete; new. Very good poem.

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Bel Claveria Carig Martinez 18 January 2012

Thank you Dave Walker....appreciate your feedback very much

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Dave Walker 18 January 2012

A really wonderful poem really like it.

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