Monday, August 20, 2012

Friends All Over The World Comments

Rating: 4.5

Friends all over the world at first don't know each other
They _perhaps_ live in opposite sights and think that they bother each other

Feel of ignorance, feel of being alone is like a cracking hammer
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Ellias Anderson Jr.
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Eindaray Kyaw 13 September 2012

it is worth to read your poem coz i can see the friendship and essential peace through your poem. That's really great Well Done!

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Nader Baheri 01 September 2012

wondeful one.children shouldn't be killed, shouldn't be raped, and..... but it is the fact. as you have mentioned in your poem, the politicians usually do not care. very beautifull one

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Hamid Negah 25 August 2012

I hope the kids grow up with a good spirit and all the people in this world to be comfortable, nice writting Ellias.

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Hamid Negah 25 August 2012

I hope the kids grow up with a good spirit and all the people in this world to be comfortable, nice writting Ellias.

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Hamid Negah 25 August 2012

I hope the kids grow up with a good spirit and all the people in this world to be comfortable, nice writting Ellias.

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2012

Hey Ellias, you leak your part of our collaboration.....but oh no what can i do, never mind at least i have opportunity to comment yours...the poem full with humanity and rights, when i have your part to combine with my part to be one poem, it really hard you know as each couplet are strong and it can stand itself....it really good :) but hey dont worry our collaboration work will get new evolution, in new shape...we will finish it soon..ready! _Unwritten SOul

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Terry O'leary 20 August 2012

Ellias, youare right... chidren should be allowed to live their lives... without threat of death or worse... Good poem, very expressive... Terry

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

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