Friends All Over The World Comments

it is worth to read your poem coz i can see the friendship and essential peace through your poem. That's really great Well Done!

wondeful one.children shouldn't be killed, shouldn't be raped, and..... but it is the fact. as you have mentioned in your poem, the politicians usually do not care. very beautifull one

I hope the kids grow up with a good spirit and all the people in this world to be comfortable, nice writting Ellias.

I hope the kids grow up with a good spirit and all the people in this world to be comfortable, nice writting Ellias.

I hope the kids grow up with a good spirit and all the people in this world to be comfortable, nice writting Ellias.

Hey Ellias, you leak your part of our collaboration.....but oh no what can i do, never mind at least i have opportunity to comment yours...the poem full with humanity and rights, when i have your part to combine with my part to be one poem, it really hard you know as each couplet are strong and it can stand itself....it really good :) but hey dont worry our collaboration work will get new evolution, in new shape...we will finish it soon..ready! _Unwritten SOul

Ellias, youare right... chidren should be allowed to live their lives... without threat of death or worse... Good poem, very expressive... Terry