Amazing Earthly beings
No they are not divine
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..indeed they are wonderful friends...i love your writing style thanx for sharing (:
God created one for me, nesting on the friendship tree-this is such a beautiful line! The entire 3rd verse is so Outstanding- Deserves 10,10- Constance Yost
At times parents, at times teachers Imbibed with everyone's features ... well captured
Very nice poem.Its really a great honour for your friends to have such a nice friend. Good and enjoyable poem. I want to be your friend too.
And sharad one more thing..... I thing you won't mind but there's a spelling mistake in the second line of the last paragraph, 'Only foolish buy it and sell', instead of swell, , i guess.... sorry if i got you wrong! ! ! ! forgive me for so much criticization......: (
It's an awesum attempt by you sharad but I think that somewhere your thoughts were lagging behind the vocabulary you used! ! ! ! ! May be I didn't understand it, the way you tried to explain, well that must be my fault! ! ! 1 Otherwise, thank you a lot to tell us our importance in your life... I'm happy to have you as my friend and you deserve a special place, as you were the first one to comment upon my creations! ! ! ! ! :)
I enjoyed this poem. It has a different and unexpected take on what a friendship can offer.
its really good... i just started it and couldnt resist until i finished it...
This is well written and you rhyme well. I am not the type to bond with people but I find envy in this feeling of love for your friends.
This is indeed a wonderful tribute to your friends- love it- thanks for inviting me to read it- Many thanks, Claudia
Very good poem Juneja, a truly wonderful tribute to your friends.
Absolutely a beautiful poem on the subject of friendship dear poet. Keep writing such precious gems